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"Intact"
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"Intact" |
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D edgar Grey Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 174Hell...(aka Wisconsin) |
I wrote this piece after I discovered Vladimir Mayakowsky's "A Cloud in Trousers" piece in a book of poems my English teacher lent to me. I wrote it for my best friend, whom I have a really, really, realllllllllllly big crush on (yeah, I'm dumb. Get used to it.). So...yeah. Be honest. State your opinions like they are. But give me reasons at the same token...Okay, enough rambling. Oh, and just to give you a warning: There is some hentai (perverted) stuff in here...but it isn't too bad. heh heh heh.... ---------------------------------------------------- "Intact" Don't you see? I have been overcome by Stupidity's greatest ally! I fight within to suppress Impossible emotions... Yet it devours me whole And I can't escape Its painful bit Shreds my skin as tears Never fall; But instead remain in The reservoir I'm sorry that I Allowed this to happen... So make it stop! Yes! You must take Stupidity's Friend and shred it! Burn it! DESTROY IT! Do it now while I'm still weak, While I can still bear the pain I look for Diana, but she's gone On another hunt? Or is she hiding her face as tears Dark as she Flow with mine of white? I'm tired now So I will sleep But my first thought Will be of Stupidity's lover Which you haven't Destroyed Sleepless dreams fill my mind Chatter fills the room As peers fill desks Lost in my own world Spraying my face Beating my back with soft water The lull of My breath Calms my mind But life resumes Filling me with joy and pain, hatred and nothing Stupidity's Ally Friend Lover Pumping blood, fuelling emotions Left Intact "Am assured,receptive,responsive women of substance. My sense of self comes not from other people but from myself? That can't be right." Bridget Jones |
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~K Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 104 |
This is Beautiful! I really liked the tears in the reservoir & the reference to Diana. I was looking for the perversion but I must have missed it, although I must confess I am rather partial to dark poetry.  |
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D edgar Grey Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 174Hell...(aka Wisconsin) |
The perverted stuff is with the part with Diana. Thanks for the compliments, though! >; ) Yeah, I prefer darker stuff, but I haven't written much lately...sniffle, sniffle! "Am assured,receptive,responsive women of substance. My sense of self comes not from other people but from myself? That can't be right." Bridget Jones |
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