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Dear Mother
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Dear Mother |
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Succubus Member
since 2002-09-30
Posts 82Canada, Ontario |
Dear Mother: The sun was bright but I could not see it The clouds were white but it was the grey I was seeing The flowers were blooming while I was ignoring Birds were singing while I was snoring Children were running I was too busy to look Teenagers playing ball others reading a book Mothers taking their babies for a ride in the park Old people with their old dogs, and their annoying barks Cars beeping, bikes riding Balls rolling, leaves falling Seasons changing, days passing Rain pouring, glasses crashing People on their roller blades gliding down the street Others on their scooters riding free feeling the cold autuum breeze climbing on the highest branch of a tree Feeling arms holding you tight Feeling a pair of lips against mine Feeling a hand in mine is so devine Feelings forgotton but still so genuine... So many things I chose not to see So many things I will never have a chance to be So many people I never met So many goals I will never set Mother I love you, this ain't no lie I never, ever meant to make you cry Don't go upstairs, for I've taken my life Don't bring me back, just let me die Some say it's better to have 10% of something than a 100% of nothing... ...But I'll only settle for a 100 thank you... [This message has been edited by Succubus (10-15-2002 08:12 PM).] |
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Amaranthine Member
since 2002-10-06
Posts 61ON Canada |
...what can I say the end of this one sneaked up on me! Ouch. |
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EleanorMoonbaby Member
since 2002-09-02
Posts 202England, UK |
Yep, this was a good 'un! Well done! "Last night, I had a dream that I went to the doctors, and she gave me eight minutes to live. I'd spent thirty minutes in the f***ing waiting room"- S |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Nice work....enjoyed. DeaDiAmore |
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FuzzyFrazzledFraggle Member
since 2002-09-20
Posts 155Fraggle Rock |
enjoyed...I know really how orginial *sigh* sorry Consider yourself fuzzed |
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