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Dark Poetry #3

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Zall
Member

since 2002-08-25

Posts 214
London, England

0 posted 2002-10-14 04:06 AM

Penetrating the crowd
Lonely path and purpose
Streets not as loud
Perhaps its just focus
Emotional reception
The past’s resistance
A limited perception
A linear existence

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2002-10-14 02:45 PM

I like this. Complete of thought in few of word. Very nicely done.

Amaranthine
Member

since 2002-10-06

Posts 61
ON Canada

2 posted 2002-10-14 11:25 PM

If I do not mistake your meaning (which I think I don't) then I must express my great admiration for this piece! You show a great wisdom here in few words. Strange synchronicity indeed that allows such great meaning to travel between interior worlds!

Zall
Member

since 2002-08-25

Posts 214
London, England

3 posted 2002-10-15 04:19 AM

Thank you both for your praise

Succubus
Member

since 2002-09-30

Posts 82
Canada, Ontario

4 posted 2002-10-15 06:33 PM

Beautiful. Amaranthine said it all. You portrayed wisdom and a great sence of control in a just a few lines... worthy of envy,
Kisses,
Succubus

Some say it's better to have 10% of something than a 100% of nothing...
...But I'll only settle for a 100 thank you...

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