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Zall
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since 2002-08-25
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London, England

0 posted 2002-10-14 04:06 AM


Penetrating the crowd
Lonely path and purpose
Streets not as loud
Perhaps its just focus
Emotional reception
The past’s resistance
A limited perception
A linear existence


© Copyright 2002 Aaron Zall - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2002-10-14 02:45 PM


I like this. Complete of thought in few of word. Very nicely done.
Amaranthine
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since 2002-10-06
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2 posted 2002-10-14 11:25 PM


If I do not mistake your meaning (which I think I don't) then I must express my great admiration for this piece!  You show a great wisdom here in few words.  Strange synchronicity indeed that allows such great meaning to travel between interior worlds!
Zall
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since 2002-08-25
Posts 214
London, England
3 posted 2002-10-15 04:19 AM


Thank you both for your praise

Succubus
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since 2002-09-30
Posts 82
Canada, Ontario
4 posted 2002-10-15 06:33 PM


Beautiful.  Amaranthine said it all.  You portrayed wisdom and a great sence of control in a just a few lines... worthy of envy,
Kisses,
Succubus

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