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brian sites
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0 posted 2002-10-09 12:43 PM


love me
    let me steal from you
love me
    let me lie to you

i piss myself
    the cats aren't fed
there's mold growing
    in my bed

a case of beer
    won't punish me
break my windows
    so i can free

it's not my fault
    can't you see
you people just don't
    love me

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WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2002-10-09 12:51 PM


Well dear me Brian. I sure love ya. This is different.
serenity blaze
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2 posted 2002-10-09 01:23 PM


You have painted the true graphic picture of "days of wine and roses" bri...

left me feeling angry, but frustrated and helpless--I know a thousand Erics...and it's heartbreaking. Hugs you.

bsquirrel
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3 posted 2002-10-09 03:14 PM


brian,
Only YOU
could make a poem
with the word "piss"
sensitive!

eor
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blues & greys
4 posted 2002-10-10 05:22 AM


this sadden me, but yet it put a healthy light on things, thanks you...eor
devina
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5 posted 2002-10-10 04:45 PM


**Love**

sending ya some bri...

hafta clench the heartstrings fer this one.

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



brian sites
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6 posted 2002-10-10 05:17 PM


Anne - thanks lady for the love *back*
Love - nono stamp those out, not from me no
Mike - sensitive...oh! the clap! I got it!
eor -  thank you
Tanya - awwww....thankyou, girl. write us you

bsquirrel
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7 posted 2002-10-10 06:18 PM


Write us?
Us is it?
My precious!
We hates Baggins!
WE HATES ITTTT!

(aherm)

MikeNeedingToGoHome

brian sites
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8 posted 2002-10-10 06:24 PM


aahhhhh Mike
you figured out my
Truename
now I'm sent away
*Gollum*

bsquirrel
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9 posted 2002-10-10 06:26 PM


Oh lord....
bad '70s animation
in my head.
Won't leave.
Won't leave me
be.

(smaug is not a cat
with flashlight eyes!)

Again,
I depart.
*places ring on fingy*

serenity blaze
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10 posted 2002-10-10 06:34 PM


I swear sometimes I think you guys do that stuff just to make me smile...
bsquirrel
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11 posted 2002-10-10 06:47 PM


It couldn't hurt.

.m.

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