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Sinful_Steph
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since 2002-10-03
Posts 35
Toronto, Ontario (Canada)

0 posted 2002-10-07 04:20 PM


Years have gone by
I feel all alone
I still have nobody
To call my own

I thought I found him
You know, the one
He was just messing with my heart
And now he’s done

Well it’s not really over
My heart belongs to him
I pray one day we’ll be together
But I’m not going out on a lim

I don’t think it will happen
He’s not the one for me
I want to believe he is
But I can’t envision it to be

For the rest of our lives
In order for it to be
I have to be with someone
Who is devoted to us for eternity

Devoted he isn’t
Everything else describes him best
I have to try to move on
And put the memories of him to rest

Selfish, dishonest, neglectful
Unfaithful just to name a few
These words describe the way he is
And some of the things he likes to do

Hurtful is another word
Explains why I always cry
He says and does a lot of hurtful things
Sometimes I wonder why?

I think he gets pleasure
From causing others pain
He hurts me on a regular basis
Time and time again

What goes around comes around
That’s what they say
One day he’ll learn his lesson
Then it’s time for him to pay

For someone to do to him
As he has done unto others
For it to change his life only
Not his mother, father, sister, or brothers

He will look back on his life
When judgement day is here
See all the things he’s done
And begin to know fear

He will beg for forgiveness
But his heart isn’t true
He can’t hide this
It is seen through and through

He’ll rot in hell
For all of his lies
He’ll have an eternity to reflect
To do nothing but ask himself “why?”

“Why did I do the things I did?”
Is what he’s going to wonder
“I could have done things different
Instead of bringing myself under”

He won’t know happiness
He won’t know a love that’s true
All he’ll know is why he’s there
And that’s because of what he did to me and to you!

"Love me little, Love me long, Is the burden of my song" - Robert Herrick

© Copyright 2002 Stephanie Di Ginosa - All Rights Reserved
Succubus
Member
since 2002-09-30
Posts 82
Canada, Ontario
1 posted 2002-10-07 07:25 PM


I loved this piece.  Remember that somebody better will come along eventually and that there'll be better days.  The relationships that didn't work will have prepared you for the big one.  "With every goodbye you learn. Kisses are not contracts and presents are not promises.  So plant your own garden instead of waiting for somebody to give you flowers..."
One day you'll look back, while having a beer with your friends, and you will say to them "what the hell was I thinking? He ain't worthy."  Or take it from Toni Braxton... "He wasn't man enough for me..."
Loved your poem hon,
Take care,
Succubus

Better to have 10% of something than a 100% of nothing.

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-10-08 12:02 PM


There's a song by Jim Steinman, sung by Meatloaf, called Paradise by the Dashboard Light. At one point, he pledges the rest of his life to his girl, both of them barely 17 years old. The song ends

"So now I'm praying for the end of time
to hurry up and arrive.
'Cause if I've gotta spend another minute with you
I don't think I can really survive.
I'll never break my promise,
never break my vow,
but God only knows what I could do right now.
So I'm praying for the end of time,
that's what I'll do (oo, oo).
I'm praying for the end of time
so I can end my time with you."

Give it time.

Amaranthine
Member
since 2002-10-06
Posts 61
ON Canada
3 posted 2002-10-11 01:09 PM


So lonely, only not alone.  How can this be?!
I hope he rots in Hell too.  (nice poem)

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