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moshpit
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since 1999-11-25
Posts 143
cebu, philippines
0 posted 2002-10-07 04:08 AM


Make me cry,
Do I please?
No need to try,
Just panic to peace.

Help me fly
Along the breeze.
Just you and I,
We panic to peace.
© Copyright 2002 guile canencia - All Rights Reserved
bsquirrel
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
1 posted 2002-10-07 12:00 PM

You were wise in using
"panic to peace/
panic to peace"

Good lines!
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