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Yelling |
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iMMuNe Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 49Maine, USA |
Im just listening, Listening to the parents, Yelling and dwelling upon my niece who is always screaming. Screaming her head off, My ma needs to [edit], Shes always yelling at my old man, You got two hands why dont you use them! He uses two hands, But what she dont understand, Is that she needs start realising that, My father is in chronic pain. Surgeries after surgeries, Make him a stronger man, Yet weak inside, All this commotion just wants me to blow up inside. Yelling, WHY Yelling, WHY Why are they Yelling? Who Knows! Why Try?! Trying no... Yelling, Yes! I guess its for the best, I walked out the door and never returned to that domestic stress.. -iMMuNe- [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (10-07-2002 12:25 PM).] |
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Amaranthine Member
since 2002-10-06
Posts 61ON Canada |
Perhaps you agree with my belief that home is NOT where the heart is? I believe that home can only be where one is at that moment... so walking out was a good thing |
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iMMuNe Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 49Maine, USA |
Indeed I do completely agree with you. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I loved the surgeries after surgeries bit. That could be a poem in itself. Just so y' know, if you want to include harsh language, you need to write [edit]. It's too easy to count the asteriks and divulge the meanin', otherwise. Enjoyed, iMMuNe. |
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iMMuNe Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 49Maine, USA |
Alright man ill be sure to edit it next time and thanx for the compliments  -immy- |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
You have shown darkness within this poem and others as well. Direct it through your words carefully and you shall rule among the under world. :-) |
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