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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2002-10-04 05:49 PM


Awakened by the sound of gray beats.
Water slips from overhang.
Some, smart, split apart on table.
Others comfort in the ground.

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (10-04-2002 06:01 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-10-04 09:13 PM


Growing up in the Valley, I remember these grey rain drops, splitting plant leaves and roots as they collectively poured from the gutters, muddying the ground all around.
I was born on a rainy day.

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2 posted 2002-10-06 03:07 AM


That better be the start of a poem!
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