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...Is this Truly Life???
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...Is this Truly Life??? |
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Succubus Member
since 2002-09-30
Posts 82Canada, Ontario |
Year after year I look back at the past The actions I've taken And all the broken hearts Month after month I am hunted by deamons they chase me in my dreams and corrupt my spirit Week after week I am driven insane By those I have not met but who judge me just the same Day after Day My happiness decreases This is the price I must pay- I am no longer fearless Night after Night I watch in discontent The horror, the fight that I can only lament Hour after hour I'm now being consumed by the emptiness- the void that I must carry in my womb Minute after minute I focus on remaining in control I keep my shields up But how long can they hold? Second after second My head spins faster and faster Will this madness ever stop? Is after life any harder? The time has come to leave behind All the anguish and the pain God said my last words were: I NEVER WANT TO COME BACK HERE AGAIN!!! |
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D edgar Grey Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 174Hell...(aka Wisconsin) |
Peculiar style, but nicely done just the same! "Am assured,receptive,responsive women of substance. My sense of self comes not from other people but from myself? That can't be right." Bridget Jones |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Minute after minute I focus on remaining in control I keep my shields up But how long can they hold?" Indeed, how long can they hold? as long as necessary I guess. Interesting time travel piece, years down to minutes, and then to the final seconds of...Darkness. |
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nolon Junior Member
since 2002-09-25
Posts 20Louisiana,Unitedstates |
Going from not so bad to worst. Very good way of choosing words. The poem was wonderful. It was also very sad. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 Let me guess, you're goth.Loved this! |
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Succubus Member
since 2002-09-30
Posts 82Canada, Ontario |
Actually, no... but I have been to goth bars and fetish parties in the past... they're very fun, and the people are great... My best friend is goth, so we dress up once in a while... I do love when I have leather against my skin... makes me feel sexy all over (LOL)... I guess you can say I am mostly a Gina. I love dance music, R&B, and pretty much anything that either drives me to dance or to laugh or cry. Kisses, Succubus |
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