Dark Poetry #3 |
Blackend Heart |
Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
This blackend heart within Me Beating rather slow It's suffering from a painful Lost, Losing you, My world My heart is bruised and battered Covered with deep scares The pain that ripples through it Was your love you gave, in which I lost, It's to late to mend this withering Heart, It has lost it's beat for Love Soon there will be nothing left But a black hole, where love use to Live I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
painful and honest. A moving piece, full of feel and pain. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I know where you're coming from and it's definitely one of the hardest things to bare. So I wish you the best. As for your poem, It was a beautiful poem that showed your feelings clearly as though they were pouring out onto the page. Well done. I am no one if not myself. Angel of Darkness |
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