Dark Poetry #3 |
Darker shades of me |
FuzzyFrazzledFraggle Member
since 2002-09-20
Posts 155Fraggle Rock |
You know My Dear Friend It's not always so easy To coax me Out of my stubborn state of mind I might come off At times Light and airy You wonder why I laugh in your face When you think You compliment me When you say That I am a sparkly Faerie of your dreams The essence of your fantasy I'm not your Prima Donna Far from your Pixie Ballerina Deep inside this hidden heart You'll find memories painting Upon the canvas The Darker shades of my existence The Pandora's box You tend to avoid You only see what you want to see And never the Darker Shades of me.. Consider yourself fuzzed |
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leafseranade Member
since 2001-07-06
Posts 118Wisconsin, USA |
"you only see what you want to see and not the darker shades of me" Best lines. How true. Some people only want to take the good and ignore the bad. The only way to really love a person is to love all sides of them. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
So, I see that you're not always so "Fuzzy", and that's probably a good thing. ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
liked it arthur ? given that we are all creatures of many moods do we change in answer to some hidden mechanism or is it just a response to outside influences |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
The second you said Pixie ballerina, my mind flashed the cover of Surfer Rosa. Was that intentional? |
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FuzzyFrazzledFraggle Member
since 2002-09-20
Posts 155Fraggle Rock |
Squirrel no, it wasn't intentional just sounded right yanno btw thanks guys for the replies! Consider yourself fuzzed |
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Succubus Member
since 2002-09-30
Posts 82Canada, Ontario |
I loved this piece. Sinister, and very dark... I really enjoyed this. ...don't we all hide or try to control all of our darker shades now and then? If they only knew what lurks behind our maskes (kidding). Thanx, that was great. Kisses, Succubus Better to have 10% of something than a 100% of nothing. |
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Amaranthine Member
since 2002-10-06
Posts 61ON Canada |
Most of us are so afraid of our own id, our own dark nature, that we simply couldn't handle glimpsing that of another. Those who can, possess strength enough to deserve admiration or envy, and may even be capable of true and honest love! Nice piece. |
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