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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2002-09-22 09:16 PM


Forest rainy mud.
Roots and earth tilled by the sky.
Sod and bone beneath.
Did he ever dream her hand
before he was skeleton?

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (09-22-2002 09:17 PM).]

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wranx
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1 posted 2002-09-22 09:29 PM


So...This is a Tanka. Not bein' funny here squirrel dude, just figgered out what a poem is. Now I find out they come in different flavors.

And this was a tasty little thing.

~Ed

WhiteRose
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2 posted 2002-09-22 09:34 PM


Yes, surely, a tonka of a tanka. Enjoyed!
FuzzyFrazzledFraggle
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3 posted 2002-09-22 09:43 PM


I must admit I have no idea what a tanka is
SOMEONE please take away my license to write But is very very interesting...

Consider yourself fuzzed

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-09-22 09:48 PM


Mikey!
Good one!
Tanka very much!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

leafseranade
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5 posted 2002-09-22 09:53 PM


Very nice dark tanka! This inspires me to try my hand at anothere tanka piece of my own.  I wrote a series of them encompased into one poem that I was quite pleased with, so I'm thinking I'll try it again. Once again, nice work.
arthur
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england
6 posted 2002-09-23 05:24 AM


tanka the otter?
no that was tarka
anyway
I enjoyed it
a few bones were once the whole universe
arthur

bsquirrel
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7 posted 2002-09-23 04:00 PM


I'm glad you all enjoyed.

A tanka? Basically, 5-7-5-7-7.

Or a haiku that drools out the ending, in other words.

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