Dark Poetry #3 |
torture |
eternal_darkone Junior Member
since 2001-02-07
Posts 14 |
I endoure the torture I live through the pain I still have the bruses They won't go away My bones have been broken But I cant feel the pain I dont under stand it All say the same No medicine can cure it It is mine to keep The pain I feel Comes from indeep It comes from the torture And hatred the same The hatred I keep Locked up inside The hatred thats become Harder to hide With each passing day As it grows stronger It tries to make me weak But i con no longer hide it So bide you farwell Is you try to fight it |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
I have read your posts - your despair is evident - it reflects in the name you chose... I hope your writing will help you in dealing with your pain... I wish I could say something to help - I know what despair is like, but not hate... Hate frightens me, because it feeds on itself and grows....while despair digs a hole deeper and deeper... When I'm down, I sometimes use wonder as a tool to help me up.... I pick up a pebble, wonder where it came from - smell a flower, wonder what causes its fragrance - look at a star's flicker and wonder how to comprehend the light-years it has travelled. I guess it's because wonder creates amazement, and amazement leads to appreciation, appreciation to thankfulness... And thankfulness can overcome almost anything! sorry if I've rambled. I wish you well.... Lary |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Wow. I came with consoling words, but it seems Lary has said it all so well. Yes, wrap your fingers around one star you pick out as you stare out your window one night. Stare at it, wish upon it. Smile thinking about it's tiny beauty, important among all the other stars. Joy Our doubts are traitors, And make us loose the good we oft might win By fearing to attempt. ~Shakespeare |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
Reading this made me think a lot about how I hide my hatred/anger/feelings all the time. And the part where you talk about it being harder to hide... it does come to that point, and that was the point where I realized I couldn't hide everything in anymore. It just doesn't work that way. So now I'm slowly letting everything out... hopefully that will help you too. "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
You speak from your soul, as well as mine. ~Broken~(to) |
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