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Chameleon Member
since 2002-08-07
Posts 99Australia |
Borne Again ----------- My friend, told me the walls are closin in. He says 'I could save you too'. But Rubs me down from shoulders and my back and turns me around to say goodbye. Iam as coloured as your fashioned other. Take one look, roll your eyes, Just don't look twice to bother. He says I've been borne again, wrist bang- bruised in animaton. Please don't bother coming around tonite, i won't be home... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Nicholas, I like how the poem leaves you wondering -- how many interpretations you can take from these bruised words. Mike [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (08-28-2002 02:28 PM).] |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
hmm...good write. I like. ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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Chameleon Member
since 2002-08-07
Posts 99Australia |
Thanks. Well, Mike i'll give you the angle you need...His friend, is his imaginary friend. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Wow! That's sinister and perfect! Mike |
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