Dark Poetry #3 |
The Message |
Zall Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214London, England |
Weary Mind and soul Holding back the tide Even one can make the difference No longer in equilibrium As we stumble toward the light Unspeakable foulness Threatens to engulf us It’s not the pixels that matter Think about the message Are you reminded of darker times You should be |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
*scratches head*...make me think again. This is good. ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
I don't know what the message is, exactly. Did you try to hide it, or have I lost my ability to read between the lines? Either way, *sighs*, i like the mood of this. |
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Zall Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214London, England |
Dont overanalyse it, thats not the point I would tell you, but what it means to you is more important. Its clear to me, but then it should be. The hairs stood up on the back of my neck after I had finished it though Thanks for your praise |
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