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Dark Poetry #3

Contrary

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-08-27 01:22 PM

I feel contrary to you, I do
and can find no other way, to say
I've fallen in the midst, I slipped
unable to recover the pose, I froze.

I sleep the sleep of silence, in defiance
of the perfection claimed, in blame.
The friction too much, without touch
contrary I reside, perfection denied.

WhiteRose

Touch me with your whispers,
and I'll listen with my heart.

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

1 posted 2002-08-27 02:08 PM

There's a lot to like here.
Don't know where to start...So I'll finish.

Liked much!

~wranx

Dragon Mistress
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

2 posted 2002-08-27 04:42 PM

This was nice. I wouldnt change a darn thing!

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

Zall
Member

since 2002-08-25

Posts 214
London, England

3 posted 2002-08-27 07:25 PM

Nice work,

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-08-28 02:38 PM

WhiteRose,
The rhythm reminded me of Motown for some reason. I can hear plaintive cries
to the radio silence.

?

Mike

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