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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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An older one. By the snowy window She draws on her long, black gloves by the snowy window, pulling darkness to darkness. I'm floating in bed, the covers strangely neat and tucked. If she smiles right now, I will be destroyed. I'm waiting for her to say something, anything -- about faith, about trust, about love. She simply works on her boots, the zippers shining like silver miniature moons. God, I hate you. Please don't go. All that comes out is a sigh in hope that she will pass me anything at all. |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Wowzie. I liked this... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Great drama, squirell dude. You're killin' me. Can't keep up with the hyper-prolific rodent. ~Ed In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
parhaps i might put some old ones on too if I can dig them out  great write again If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
"strangely neat and tucked" is needles "she simply works on...." is nails on chalkboard subtle geniuses huh next time you wanna throw around "great"?do it in a mirror, whyncha? you continually astound ever reading brian |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
I would say this sooo has to be around the time of Late Night Conversations, but my memory just doesn't go so far back. Sounds like Lauren to me. *kisses* Lovely baby. i'll be waiting for you |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Dragon Mistress, thanks. Do the Rolling Stones know you're using their logo? Wranx, I think I write to keep from being depressed sometimes. I must have a lot of near-misses!  Maria,  Brian, the strange thing is I read this response of yours right after reading Serenity's "My Eyes." Mirror, mirror... Lori, cool, thanks for reminding me where I got this idea from! *kiss* Love y'. Mikey |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
touche, Mike damn |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
This has lost NOTHING in the time gone by Still great, squirrel dude! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
God how do you do this Mikey? bitter coldness xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (07-20-2003 03:04 PM).] |
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