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A smile,Thanks to you
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A smile,Thanks to you |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
"Angel" came on the radio That's when you began to sing to me On our way to work Looking deep into my eyes beyond my battered soul You made me smile, and giggle A little Took me by the hand, Kissed it Began to sing again My head lowered, as i shyed away, Smiled and Giggled a little The boyish look in your eyes swept Me off my feet The feeling of happiness shown Through, brighter then the sun Could Just watching you sing and dance a Little As i sat and watched and giggled a little Funny how you bring out the inner Child in me, which has been locked Away for so long Thanks, for making me "Giggle" a Little at the worst of times I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- [This message has been edited by Temptress*Moon (edited 02-06-2001).] |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
temp- i always enjoy your work, you know that so i am not sure what else to say, other then, who is the "you" in this poem, if you dont mind sharing  "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN "There is no always forever, just this"-the cure |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
your way of narrating made me visualize the situation really good it actually made me smile while reading the poem good work keep sharing So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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