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Hidden Lies, inspired by 1slick_lady ('betrayed')
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Hidden Lies, inspired by 1slick_lady ('betrayed') |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
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Hidden Lies (inspired by 1slick_lady) And some think nakedness is just standing there with your clothes off But we know that your shirt hasn't much to do with your secrets We've been under your skin to find connection with your cold heart And gone down to your bones to come in touch with your hardened soul No shirt, no skin, no bones but nowhere a nakedness with your hidden lies. Krawdad 2.06.01 [This message has been edited by Krawdad (edited 02-06-2001).] |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
check your e mail helen |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
noooo please leave it helen |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
smoooooch......funny how little makes me happy LOL |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Well, this was interesting. But not, I bet, as interesting as the story behind it. An intriguing read, tho. I applaud for the mystery of it.  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Krawdad, interesting write. I bet it would have been more so before the changes. For an unschooled amateur you do this pretty well. Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
Very interesting,and rather clever,i liked it,kept my attention. sam Do i contradict myself?Very well i contradict myself.I contain multitudes.~walt whitman |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Kethry, Serenity, Well, there was a little juggling in the wee hours of the morning . . . following that ricochetting brain spasm I had. Nothing lost, something gained I hope. Ya just never know . . . makes this place most interesting. Thanks for stopping by. Kraw' [This message has been edited by Krawdad (edited 02-06-2001).] |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Hi sam, just the sort of thing that takes over my brain cells after 1am. who knows??? glad you liked it. kraw' |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
Kraw..Indeed this was a good one*very intereting to read! Temptress*Moon I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
yes .....those are the bones......helen |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
well now..lol wish we knew the whole story behind slick lady's odd replies to this one..  i really liked this write from you KRAW! i thought it was very nicely done..and much truth too.. hugs, g "maybe one day we can turn and face our fears maybe one day we can reach out through our tears..." -a grant |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
very nice and very true i liked this  |
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