Dark Poetry #3 |
I don't have much left to say anyway. |
Chameleon Member
since 2002-08-07
Posts 99Australia |
I don't have much left to say anyway ------------------------------------ If I just had one kiss, I'd like to breathe-in just for once. No-one would miss. No-one would miss. If I just had one kiss, I'd blow it away. Kiss-Kiss. Breathe it in. Blow it away. Let the sun rays burn my lips. Kiss-Kiss... |
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Chameleon Member
since 2002-08-07
Posts 99Australia |
well, Mr invisible lizard sir? Its interesting enough. i think... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
It is interesting.... (are you talking to yourself? LOL I saw that you had one reply and that one was yours - that drew my curiosity. Glad I stopped in - the poem is unusual. If you hang around here long enough will you turn blue?) |
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Chameleon Member
since 2002-08-07
Posts 99Australia |
Funny you would say that Poet, wise man once said... "Being blue is you"(unknown). But yes i will admit, iam the crazy of the 5% of the population who will talk to themselves |
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desolation angel Junior Member
since 2002-08-11
Posts 20east coast |
that poem has nice rhythm, and you talk to yourself and that's just rad. :P i like. don't undress my love |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
generous or hopeless...either way, not the selfish way i'd spend my last kiss. you're a better person than i. they say it's not talking to yourself that makes you crazy. it's answering yourself. i don't know how true that is. there's more truth in it than you'd think. oh. *phew* it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown |
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