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Chameleon
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0 posted 2002-08-14 04:28 AM



I don't have much left to say anyway
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If I just had one kiss, I'd like to breathe-in just for once.
No-one would miss.
No-one would miss.
If I just had one kiss, I'd blow it away.
Kiss-Kiss.
Breathe it in.
Blow it away.
Let the sun rays burn my lips.
Kiss-Kiss...



© Copyright 2002 Nicholas Hall - All Rights Reserved
Chameleon
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since 2002-08-07
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1 posted 2002-08-15 02:07 AM


well, Mr invisible lizard sir?

Its interesting enough. i think...

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2002-08-15 09:06 AM


It is interesting....

(are you talking to yourself? LOL I saw that you had one reply and that one was yours - that drew my curiosity. Glad I stopped in - the poem is unusual. If you hang around here long enough will you turn blue?)

Chameleon
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since 2002-08-07
Posts 99
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3 posted 2002-08-15 09:28 AM


Funny you would say that Poet, wise man once said... "Being blue is you"(unknown).
But yes i will admit, iam the crazy of the 5% of the population who will talk to themselves

desolation angel
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since 2002-08-11
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east coast
4 posted 2002-08-15 09:15 PM


that poem has nice rhythm, and you talk to yourself and that's just rad. :P i like.

don't undress my love
you might find a mannequin:
don't undress the mannequin
you might find
my love
-bukowski

MidnightSon
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since 2002-05-15
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between the gutter & the stars
5 posted 2002-08-16 06:02 AM


generous or hopeless...either way, not the selfish way i'd spend my last kiss. you're a better person than i.

they say it's not talking to yourself that makes you crazy. it's answering yourself.
i don't know how true that is.

there's more truth in it than you'd think.

oh. *phew*

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

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