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Elegy of a Lonely Fate

Broken
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since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

0 posted 2002-08-13 12:06 PM

ELEGY OF A LONELY FATE

Whatever faith there may be
There's scarse left in me
Of friend and foe
Non followed me here

I chose just one
And forgot the beloved,
loving friends of me
But she's flown away too

Still I breathe, (silent screams)
For what, or whom?
There's no-one here
Inside these rising walls

Down the street
Of my love-parade
A scar mirage
Of a whispering glade:

"All this time
It's almost like you knew
She'd fade inn too, like rime
Like the morning dew"

I wish to thee
Sweet oblivion
Behind my weary eyes
Come and save me

From nothing else if,
Then from myself..
And the rhyme,
of the glade

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

1 posted 2002-08-13 11:08 PM

"Down the street
Of my love-parade
A scar mirage
Of a whispering glade:

"All this time
It's almost like you knew
She'd fade inn too, like rime
Like the morning dew""

I thought that this part was just amazing. And the ending was deeply felt in the core of my being.. the idea of being alone and dangerous to yourself is chilling.. and all too real.

Hello, Broken. Nice to see you again. Email me sometime if you want to.

I'm married to Mr.Metaphor. We make love everyday.

[This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (08-13-2002 11:10 PM).]

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