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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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The Darkness Visits me daily, now Casting its’ foul pall About me And works its’ way Into me Seeping Filling My lungs With cloying ooze A choking treacle It grasps my heart In bony fist Squeezing reminders That it is Above all Irresistible ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Yes! That is exactly what it's like. A dark ink BLOT that darkens everything with it's deep black ooze. A perfect description. Yet we do, for some odd reason, find it irresistible. Good job Wranx. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
I suggest Quit Smoking! no wranx, beat that *stuff* away don't let it stay and settle familiar-like It can get to be company but, you problably already know so here's some back-up BS I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
"With cloying ooze" "In bony fist" One could never come to know such vivid a darkness without also knowing it's opposite... We as humans only can understand by relation... We know bad because we've tasted good..We know hurt because we've experienced the absence of it... A born-blind man doesn't truly comprehend what we mean by GREEN grass... as one born without a nose couldn't understand that although all are born with a**h*les, some are larger and thus carry a more undesirable aroma...lol In other words, you've experienced all too well what you speak of, and convey it such that those blind or without olfactory abilities still understand...I.E. touche'! |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
Me totally thinks simply That the lead singer of The Firm Wouldn't have a shed of a clue On this one. The darkness here finally slaps away the images of fine young beauties dressed in bunny outfits wielding white guitars they know not how to play. This one was "Simply Irresistable" "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I can only hint at the darkness, as I've had my fair share of battles wranxy...haven't we all? I think that knowing something is "bad" for you makes you want it ALL the more (well, me anyhow)grins... enjoyed your chilling travel through, as always sweet man... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
You did it. You somehow wrote about a vicegrip that's ... gentle... |
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