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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
I can hide my face, but I can never really change me. I stagger to hold a place in this world. I hesitate to be a simple face. I lack verve, almost identity, and my beauty suffers. (inside and out) I strive to be free from my on growing imaginary disease. You showed me who I, and all the stupid things I did to try to find it. All the things I've tried, all the times I've lied. (people see through) No other time can humans see through, unless they're working to defeat. I understand who I am. I realize I've been running from the race ... my race. I guess, I never wanted to remember I am mortal... |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Hi Sara, I like this. None of us want to admit we are mortal. But alas, we are. Great poem. In truth, what defines us is our poetry. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You can remember..just don't ADMIT to it!!  enjoyed this!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Hey, thanks to the two of you. |
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