Dark Poetry #3 |
days gone by |
wandering Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 92 |
Tears flow Tidal emotions swell Subsiding to memories Painfully etched In forgotten cobwebbed corners Dreamily haunting Taunting me always The clock of passion ticks wickedly Tick tock Tick tock Tick tock Time to reflect Time to forget Days gone by days gone by Days gone. lost in thought, found in words. wanderer |
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He Junior Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 41 |
"Tidal emotions" I liked that line. Actually I liked the whole poem. Thanks for sharing. "Emotion revealed as the ocean maid..." |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
Exactly how I'm feeling right now* Good work*S* TemptressMoon I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
A nice rendition - enjoyed it! Lary (Also like your signature!) |
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