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~Willow~
New Member

since 2002-08-10

Posts 9

0 posted 2002-08-10 11:10 AM

I was there
dressed in black
inside & out
dancing on edges
holding your hands

you were so hansome
your smile tucked neatly
between smirk & sincere
eyes carefully detailing
my movements
drinking night wine

We paint the skies psychodelic
catching a high on the effects
until heavy lids force hallucinations
into hibernation

I dreamed you
lips set on devour
until the inferno
forced my awakening
you lie here, oblivious
lost in reveries
while I broil in conflict
acutely aware of subtle changes

Light falls like an sharpened ax
separating your night from my day
you see comraderie ending
I see a pyramid of disaster
on the horizon

I've shed darkness,
the color of lovers
& picked up a torture stake
embracing light
I can only hope that the memory
of your smile tucked neatly
between a smirk & sincerity
as you sip night wine will fade
with this longing...

~Willow~

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

1 posted 2002-08-10 11:35 AM

Welcome, Willow, To PiP and the "dark" Forum.

You have a nice pen, I enjoyed.
I think You'll like it here.

"I can only hope that the memory
of your smile tucked neatly
between a smirk & sincerity
as you sip night wine will fade
with this longing..."

Good stuff, this.

~wranx

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

2 posted 2002-08-10 02:33 PM

good emotion and scene
nice job!
and welcome to PIP
BS

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-08-10 02:57 PM

*sigh* Goodbye, R .... never stop writing. I just seem to keep losing things important to my heart today, don't I? Grr.

WhileIWasGone
Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 486

4 posted 2002-08-10 03:34 PM

Great work....enjoyed.

DeaDiAmore

heysara
New Member

since 2002-08-08

Posts 8

5 posted 2002-08-11 04:48 PM

I especially like:

"I dreamed you
lips set on devour
until the inferno
forced my awakening"

It's frightening how desires can blind us to the "obvious"... Anyway, I loved the poem- very dark, very sexy.

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