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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Aching... I choke on my heart. Suffocating... I discontinue my breaths. Burning... I still need you. Yearning... It grows. Breaking... I think of you. Dying... I bleed. Crying... I wait; Wait for a sign, a stop, a beginning, anything. Anything that will make me feel something other than this. font> They say thing never would have worked out anyway... But I wish we could have tried. [This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (08-08-2002 10:39 PM).] |
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Chameleon Member
since 2002-08-07
Posts 99Australia |
Sara, I can feel your sincerety and soul. Don't lose it, it makes you a good writer. you want a truthful reply huh? Well, this is as truthful as i can get.  |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Queasy, but good. You're getting better at masking a few things and sharing a few others. Vague Mike  |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Thanks you two. -Sara |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
As a p.s., Sara, I just saw your homepage through your profile, and I must say, KITTIE ROCKS! It's hard to find fellow fans of such a cool band (Lori turned me on to them). Anyway, that had NOTHING to do with your poem, so I'll shut up now. Mike |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
No big deal, Mike. Shadowchild and I used to do that all the time! Yes, not many people like Kittie these days, though. ttyl, sara |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Oh yea, and Mike... if you do read this... why do some of the folders turn silver-ish? |
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beccymelling Junior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 31Birmingham, England |
Oh I’ve been there. Several times. Not a nice place, but beautifully described. I really liked this poem. Thanks for sharing it. Beccy |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Sara, They turn silver when the author of the post is the last person to reply to it. (it lets people know you have replied to them) |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Ooooh. okay, i was a little confused. Thanks. |
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