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Dark Poetry #3

I've Escaped

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-08-08 09:59 AM

I've escaped
the prison walls
of unconscious
compliance.
Breaking the rules
I've achieved
gratification
beyond the realm
of useless thought.
Above the city
that lies within
your conscious,
I travel now
to places of peace
where your shadow
never was,
and thinking
is still pure.

WhiteRose

There are a million messages,
in a million bottles,
you just have to know
which one to pull out of the ocean.

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (08-08-2002 01:01 PM).]

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

1 posted 2002-08-08 12:45 PM

I can truthfully say that I loved this.
Almost everyone feels this, and you describe it perfectly (for me at least).
Continue......
-Sara

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-08-08 05:58 PM

Gotta love plane rides -- when your legs aren't compressed into your spine, that is.

heysara
New Member

since 2002-08-08

Posts 8

3 posted 2002-08-09 12:23 PM

I'm impressed... I especially like the line "I travel now to places of peace
where your shadow never was...." wow...

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

4 posted 2002-08-09 11:09 PM

Isn't escape wonderful. I especially enjoyed the last line, "... and thinking is still pure." Kudos.

"See, no one loves..." - Prayers for Rain

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