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Forever Night |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Forever Night Eyes burn as tears begin to blur And I struggle not to drown I feel the slither of the darkness And the jagged coldness of fear As it overwhelms my mind Invading with such soft whispers That send the ice shivers through The heart of my lost soul. Snuffing out the light of hope My sanity desperately searches for. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yikes! Nice work, but...Yikes! ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Great rosepetals25,,, I just love what u have written..Just keep going ur words its very strong.....I will be waiting to read more and more from u.... Good luck,, Secretlife, (Easy come....Easy go) |
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HeartBeats Junior Member
since 2002-08-03
Posts 16TX |
Direct and concise. Very good. One question though: why the period at the end of line 8? |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Konw the feeling  Nice work thoIf your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
remember. . . sometimes. .. we have to embrace the night. . . great work Tara. . . good to see you back. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ouch! Said if I only could ... |
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