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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2002-08-02 12:50 PM



Kinky intentions propel feelings of fury,
As Feathers of cradled touch,
Blair through pores of even touch.

Sheets of stylized silk
Crinkled with obscure sweat,
As bodies of endearment cradle to an even crown.

Orgasms sculpture clayed faces,
As nights of lonely fright
Turn the knob to an evening of delight

Shackled betrayal blindly forgotten,
As bodies are fought for,
With an envious fight

Bedposts ring with a singing tune,
As pupils widen with contagious jazz.
A newly discovered language, howls accents of tranquility.

Sweat roughs the muzzled faces,
While shadows paint a picture of love on the wall,
Only to be abruptly soured.

Ring, Ring…..
That was my wife, I must go,
Until tomorrow, I shall confess my love.




© Copyright 2002 Tomer Fried - All Rights Reserved
secretlife
Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,
1 posted 2002-08-03 06:01 AM


Great???Its very good..I like it very much it has astrong words meaning. And I really feel it,, Just keep going I will be waiting to read more,

good luck..


bsquirrel
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-08-06 01:13 PM


Very beautiful.

Said if I only could ...
-KB

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