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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
Remember the blood that dripped onto the floor. Each drop which sounded like the ocean coming to claim it's flood. The gleam in your eyes I had never seen before. The brighter your eyes got... the closer I came to the light. Powerless against you, that's all I had ever been. I layed beneath you, not being able to move. and not even daring to. I wonder if only I had loved you more. I could have stopped the hurt. and I am aware that I am not suppose to blame myself. When did you realize was it the night I almost died or the week before that Has it even happened yet? So, maybe if you had only loved me more. I wouldn't have had to be washed up on the shores by my red tide. ~Carman~ |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
There's many stories in the book of life. Don't let this keep you from the rest of them. Joy |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
This one stops me and makes me think. I can't decide what perspective to read this from. It is moving and mysterious. It gives me two distinct images. Despite this, I enjoyed the read so much so, I read it twice!  With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
Thank you Joy and Dragon... your replies are much appreciated Carman |
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