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MomentzBefore
Junior Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 31


0 posted 2002-07-30 07:02 PM



Things have changed
And yet
I don't know if I should do the same
Times passes
Tears fall
Months go by
And here I'm
Waiting
But for what?
To nothingness
If there's no one hold
No one to run too
No one to hide with
Just the silence
That's slowly consumes
Me inside
Tearing every inch
That's left of me
Apart
Things have changed
But why haven't I?

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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439
I am everywhere
1 posted 2002-07-30 07:34 PM


I know how you're feeling, and I'm sure it sucks. (heehee)
Wonderful poem, well said.

-Sara

You said you knew me enough to love me.
So if you loved me... why didn't you know this would hurt me?

MidnightSon
Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312
between the gutter & the stars
2 posted 2002-07-31 02:34 PM


i find myself wandering with these same thoughts...
and sometimes i think that maybe it doesn't matter if i change or not...as long as i'm content with me...
*blegh*
anyways, i enjoyed this poem much. got me thinkin...and ramblin.

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

bsquirrel
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-07-31 04:07 PM


Beautiful. HOpefully they'll change back for you again. And hopefully, you'll continue to post here!

Said if I only could ...
-KB

iMMuNe
Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 49
Maine, USA
4 posted 2002-07-31 04:18 PM


Well done, keep it up.

  

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