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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2002-07-27 09:12 AM


Black a shadow dawns,
Which every colour is based,
Upon their own dark reailty,
And underneath each a dark soul,

For when the sun shines bright,
The dark clouds will cover it black,
And when the deep blue rain falls,
The black fog elimnates its own colour
As every one is based on black.

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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MomentzBefore
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1 posted 2002-07-27 04:37 PM


I enjoyed this poem......feels good to know I can inspire you. ;-) Hope to hear from you soon....keep writtin.

-sUsAn-

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2 posted 2002-07-28 12:50 PM


Thanx again

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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