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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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I am everywhere

0 posted 2002-07-26 01:59 PM



Just enough to break the surface,
Just enough to think I'm free,
Just enough to take control,
Enough to kill the enemy.

You're all these things and much more to me.
(wish you could set me free)
All means so much to me.
(I wish you could set me free, for real)

Dear sweet,
I wish I could hide my mind from knowing::
You're only skin deep, sweet friend.
Only skin deep.

To the one
with the blue eyes that could only be of Hell::
You're only skin deep...
only skin deep.
Cut me deeper--- so you can be as deep as you feel.
(but stop killing me)

Confusing yes...
Does it make sense ... yes,
but it all depends on how you're looking at it.
(i hope you all know this is not about cutting)

"Without you, without you, everything falls apart.
Without you, It's not as much fun to pick up the peices." -NineInchNails

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1 posted 2002-07-27 08:58 AM


very dark ... i like it

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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