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Dark Poetry #3

When

Encarta
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 101
My homeland is not of the world

0 posted 2002-07-25 01:22 AM

When

When did love turn to pain?
When did sunshine turn to rain?
When did hi turn into bye?
When did darkness fill the sky?

When did I lose you?
When did you say “We’re through”?
When did your words first stab like a knife?
When did you walk out of my life?

When did life turn to death?
When did I wish for my final breath?
When did I wish to die?
When did you say bye?

"They do not love that do not show their love.”-Shakespeare

shadowchild458
Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 117
MN,USA

1 posted 2002-07-25 10:21 AM

"When did love turn to pain?
When did sunshine turn to rain?"

I love these two lines. I haven't commented on your poetry lately and I'm glad to finally get the chance to. Great poem, I loved it. Keep writing.

life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait

AKJ

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

2 posted 2002-07-25 06:28 PM

I really like this.
Those are alomost all questions I ask myself constantly.

keep writing.

-sara

"Without you, without you, everything falls apart.
Without you, It's not as much fun to pick up the peices." -NineInchNails

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