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In my dreams too
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In my dreams too |
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svandersaar Junior Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 40 |
never enough for you I would be anything but I am not want you intended, I don’t think. enough, or maybe yes, but not of the right things I could say to let you let me touch you with my words, more than once upon a time when I could say I love you and break you to your knees are on the pillow I am sucking out at least your attention now I wish I was not less stupid but more intelligent and grace to those who know the difference between what you are and what I can be is not by much but can you SEE that, darling? I can but only from this inside my chest I am a hollow red and glowing ball you’re killing me, you know? so much and yet I cannot seem to show you what I mean or what I see at all of this is wearing me through – how can you expect me not to touch you are just feet and face and one dragging soft snore in torrent blankets over my expression, you hate my serious countenance but I’m begging you to drag it out of me the way I am, you swear is what you want forever even when I am not smart enough or so you said before I flattered you with rich alto voices in my belly hating you for my need, I need less flesh to feel I’m pleasing myself while you’re out And sometimes it’s enough to pretend you’re not here , right now I feel fine being me… just to take up my own space that’s all I ask for, even when I ask for less of this might starve me, but more is killing me and oh god don’t push my hand away when you do that I die when you DO that I hate when when when you dream of me Am I less and more? In my dreams too. [This message has been edited by svandersaar (edited 02-03-2001).] |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
WOW!! Powerful read...I lke it! Thank you!! Click |
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svandersaar Junior Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 40 |
Hey, thanks, Click. Stacey |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
GREAT first post! Welcome to Dark Passions!  Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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svandersaar Junior Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 40 |
Awesome! Thanks! Stacey |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
OH My God! this is powerful and passionate and excellent writing. love it, love it! Maree Love which is not always springing is always dying. |
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svandersaar Junior Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 40 |
Maree, There you are again! I guess that deal is still on  . Thanks!Stacey |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
First off EXCELLENT first post in my opinion! The only advice i can offer is never change for anyone...if they dont love you for who you are then they are not worth your time. I hope to see more from you! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very interesting...James |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
wonderful first post...and welcome to the dark passions(even though i'm new here also)but..yea.. great piece! keep writing  |
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