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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
eight months she cried until there was a river of tears and i asked her why she wouldn't say seven weeks she mourned until she couldn't possibly care anymore and i asked her what she was mourning for she wouldn't say six days she hid until she couldn't bare it anymore and i asked her why she wouldn't say five hours she slept each night, the rest was spent screaming and i asked her why she wouldn't say four minutes she sobbed i couldn't even understand her moaning and i asked her why she wouldn't say three seconds she felt the pain until it was over she's dead i'd ask her why but i already know two people she knew and loved so dearly went against her i asked them why they wouldn't say on person payed the price it wasn't those two mindless beasts i asked them why the wouldn't say i wasn't her best friend but i could tell how this would hurt her how the one she loved and her best friend could do this to her now i know it takes eight months seven weeks six days five hours four minutes three seconds two people and one life to break a heart to kill a life though i've always known it takes only a heart beat to make an impact ok yeah this poem sucks i know but hey i though here's another poem everyone can ignore! just makin your day arent i?  sorry, i'm ok now...none of that here at passions right? ok deep breath :  : life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
lol! Loved the poem, and the little note at th bottom... You seem pissed. (And until i read the caption about taking a deep breath... that little face looked dirty.) lol. That's so funny. Keep 'em comin. I'm listening if no one else is. lylas! -Sara "Without you, without you, everything falls apart. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
great poem. From the title I thought it would be about abortion or something. Good work. Keep it up. Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.) |
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