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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

0 posted 2002-07-24 09:17 PM

I'm empty again.
My flesh is flavorless...
So now the vultures have left me.

Feed off my flesh.
Taste my pain.
Say you love me.
Then burn my remains.

I'm empty again.
My body is worthless...
So now my whole life is leaving.

I've been left behind
once again.

But this time...
I feel no need to catch up.

Let life pass me by.

"Without you, without you, everything falls apart.
Without you, It's not as much fun to pick up the peices." -NinceInchNails

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2002-07-25 12:03 PM

sometimes the battle is too much. But one must never give up. Keep up the good work.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

MIdsummerRain
Member

since 2002-05-19

Posts 175
St. Louis, Missouri

2 posted 2002-07-25 12:53 PM

"...I've been left behind
once again....But this time...
I feel no need to catch up...."

Simply Stated...This verse said it all ~Rayne

For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
increases sorrow...
Eccl. 1:18

Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

3 posted 2002-07-25 02:45 AM

"Let life pass me by."

A familiar feeling I must say.
You have an honest way of writing.
I also noticed your a NIN fan, I'm to.

Yours truly
~Broken~

Such griefs with such men well agree,
But wherefore, wherefore fall on me ?
To be beloved is all I need,
And whom I love, I love indeed.

S.T.C

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

4 posted 2002-07-25 04:29 PM

Thanks everyone.
Xeonox, I'll try to keep that in mind.
Rayne, I love your quote. And thanks for reading.
Thanks Broken. And, yes, I am a HUGE Nine Inch Nails fan... it might help if i could spell
'nine' right, though. (nince)

Thanks again,
Sara

"Without you, without you, everything falls apart.
Without you, It's not as much fun to pick up the peices." -NineInchNails

anawnda
Member

since 2002-07-26

Posts 113

5 posted 2002-07-26 04:34 AM

hi, i love your poem, im really depressed right now, i got disillusioned by this guy, anyway im new here, hope to see more of your stuff

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

6 posted 2002-07-26 12:18 PM

Thanks anawnda,
and welcome to Passions.

Yeah, sorry -- I know how bad guys suck.
I'll be sure to check out what you post here.

-Sara

"Without you, without you, everything falls apart.
Without you, It's not as much fun to pick up the peices." -NineInchNails

shadowchild458
Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 117
MN,USA

7 posted 2002-07-26 12:21 PM

hey sara! sorry i didn't reply sooner i've just been busy packing and everything. i leave for camp tomorrow and i'll be there for seven days, then i'll come home for a day and then get on a plane to california for two weeks of vacation. i'll miss you but i'll be sure to email you in the last week of my vacation. sorry i have to write this all in a comment but you aren't on aim right now so...anyways i loved the poem and it is defidently my favorite of yours. addin it to my library!

lylas!

you poetry buddy
abby

life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait

AKJ

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