I owe love (Tiersdin and I strike again)

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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2002-07-21 10:03 PM

I owe love to the footprints of the ocean.
I owe love to song upon the hills
I owe love to evening's shadows. Why?
Why do I?

Could it be the tender way in which you sigh?
Could it be those bird-shadows in the sky?
Tell me the answers.
Tell me why?

Oh god, that lightning burns.
Bolts thrown from cloud to cloud.
Rain turns into eyes;
she watches me.

Tears falling soft
upon the ache within your heart,
Soothing cool, it's love...
Our love...

Dear, I want to die.
Shhh, dear, it's all right.
I want to die among our love's intents.

Then wrap me in the tender groanings
beneath your strength,
roll over me & take my breath away
that I might slumber forever with you...

You kiss away the storm.
You hold the sea in palm.
You bid me drink your flood until
I know your secrets' calm.

Nourish me with your lips,
feed me the fire of your passion,
set ablaze the world
that holds only us two...

I owe love to the colour of your sighs.
I owe love to the keeper of my soul.
I owe love to the wishes of our nights. Do I?
I do.

My darling, I owe all my love... to you...

I sailed these ships to you.
Each bore a letter of your name.
They numbered four.
Oh, Love.

Each word bore the sweetness of your kiss
and the tenderness of your touch.
Each touch became a song
played upon your aqua eyes.

I am lost in the melody
that beckons at the edge
of your shimmering dark pools...

I drowned myself to sleep in them.
I drowned my dreams in stilled waters.

He knows the meaning of every sigh
each time he awakens me with love.
And she knows my heart
whenever I speak her name.

His warmth gives her life,
his voice wilds her tame...

I owe love to the day that bursts from you
& the night that blankets the joining of two...

Forever, Love.
I owe you.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

1 posted 2002-07-21 10:13 PM

Okay, who ever wrote "I drown myself to sleep" must be worshipped, now.

You guys still rock together.

I love you, Mikhail. My amazing poet boy.

written in blood before everything went black

JCV

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-07-21 10:17 PM

C'mon, baby, you know who always writes about drowning in poems. Love y' too.

Love = Lo ... hmmm ... ri, maybe?

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

3 posted 2002-07-21 10:18 PM

And I noticed a lot of Cure catch-words.

Was that intentional?

written in blood before everything went black

JCV

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-07-21 10:20 PM

That's so ingrained in me, I have no idea!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

5 posted 2002-07-21 11:44 PM

Well, I have an idea.
I think that I'll have to find a new way to express my appreciation for your and tiersdin's poetry. Together and separate, both of you have achieved a new level of competence.

I'm going to go find my crayons and maybe color in my SpongeBob book.

~wranx

I have great faith in Humanity...It's just most of the Humans, I'm not too keen on. E.F.Rose

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

6 posted 2002-07-22 12:04 PM

Lori, thanks! If it wasn't for you, Mikey probably couldn't come up with anything to write! *wink*

And Wranx, you need to write more! that's an order!

*chuckles*

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

7 posted 2002-07-22 12:05 PM

Just don't eat the crayons, wranx. (that's my job)

Tired Mike

P.S. Thanks!!!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

8 posted 2002-07-22 11:23 PM

Damn, squirrel dude, just noticed the fine brim an' all.

~wranx

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

9 posted 2002-07-23 12:03 PM

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2002-07-23 06:51 PM

you know. . . I really like it when two of my personal favorites get together. . .

this is why. . . a wonderful piece that just seems to fall down the page and take the reader away. . . yes. . . great work you two. . .

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