Dark Poetry #3 |
I am Darkness |
EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I am darkness Do you see me? The shadows and the gloom I am sorrow Do you know me? The sadness and the grief I am pain Do you feel me? The anguish and the ache I am despair Do you need me? The suffering and the torment I am Life Do you want me? The existence and conclusion " I have seen without perceiving I have been another man Let me pierce the realm of glamour So I know just what I am"....Dweller on the Threshold, |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
you are wonder ever near to energise both joy and sorrow you are magic with you I hear promise of tomorrow you are love with all it's pain and hope and joy as well you are life that's lived again you are poetry's swell YOU ARE WONDROUS! Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
HEY this was GOOD! And a very nice addition there, Kethry! DkW |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is so real.....and truthful, yes, it's life "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133ConcepciĆ³n, Chile |
WOOOOW! It's been raining since you left me. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Kethry ~ Me thinks it is you who are wondrous, take care! DKW ~ Yes I agree, about Kethry's addition that is. Kathleen ~ It's life! What more can you say. Thnaks for adding your thoughts. Caz ~ Thanks for stopping by, and a belated welcome also! " I have seen without perceiving I have been another man Let me pierce the realm of glamour So I know just what I am"....Dweller on the Threshold, |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You may be all these...but you are so much more... |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Eagle One, this is indead great. Glad I found you here. You know the alternative to life......... and life goes on. Hugs, ME |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Paula ~ I guess I am what I am, sometimes more, sometimes less. Take care! Mother Earth ~ I have to say I'm a little supprised to find you over here in Dark, though its always a pleasure to have you add your thoughts. Yes, it does always seem to go on dosen't it! Take care! " I have seen without perceiving I have been another man Let me pierce the realm of glamour So I know just what I am"....Dweller on the Threshold, |
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wandering Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 92 |
I enjoyed this mucho Eagle one....see ya on the boards lost in thought, found in words. wanderer |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
In darkness there is also great beauty.. and your beauty is evident in this one hon.. Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wandering ~ Glad you enjoyed! No doubt our paths will cross, it seems I'm always around here somewhere! Isis ~ Always there with a wise and kind word, your presence is appreciated. Thank you, take care! " I have seen without perceiving I have been another man Let me pierce the realm of glamour So I know just what I am"....Dweller on the Threshold, |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
EagleOne, I know of all these. Bad and good happen to strengthen. Joy Our doubts are traitors, And make us loose the good we oft might win By fearing to attempt. ~Shakespeare |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
Genious and beautifully. What you are? A darn talanted poet Yours truly ~Broken~ Oh God! Why the angels fall first? |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
interesting read, eagle..truth of life.. nicely written hugs, g "maybe one day we can turn and face our fears maybe one day we can reach out through our tears..." -a grant |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
hey, i had a poem posted in Dark Forums #2 and it goes: i am darkness i blacken everything i touch i am sin i stain people's lives i am sadness i weep at your celebrations i am fault the blame is all on me but you, you were loved. it's quite similar, right? but i admit yours is better because mine is so depressing and horrible. thanks for sharing a poem i can relate to. |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
nice poem great write1 i think too many people can relate to this |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Joy ~ Yes I agree, ultimately we gain the strength. Good & bad, light & dark, we are all of these things, a part of life's experiences. Broken ~ Certainly not the words I would use to describe myself, though I appreciate the thoughts, thank you! G ~ Thank you my friend! I think if nothing else life is most definitely interesting. moshpit ~ Some similar lines of thought there. As for being better, well that is for others to decide. Take care! Ginners ~ Yes, I think far too many of us can see only this side of life! "I've done all the dumb things"....Paul Kelly |
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