Short poem I call.... NOBODY

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Short poem I call.... NOBODY

Jonathan The Mind
Junior Member

since 2002-07-13

Posts 13
Minnesota

0 posted 2002-07-18 07:16 PM

NOBODY
By: Jonathan L.

Heavy breathing
Dry heaving,

Broken heart
Torn mind,

Glass broken
Bloody choking,

River of pain
Dying away,

This is how “nobody” dies

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

1 posted 2002-07-18 07:28 PM

Oh my god!!!
I love this!
There are two ways you could look at it, whichever one you think is right.
Nobody as someone who didn't mean much.
or Nobody as no one...

Either way, I loved it. Write On!!!
With love,
-PGoD

If we follow the invisible line of hatred, it will lead us straight to our hearts.

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