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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
'Don't let it drag. Life's too short to make it complicated. Life's too short to not be pure. Life's too short to be crazy. Life's too short, And I'm sure.' Walk in my shoes, take one bruise, that is the size of mine. You'll know it's not simple, You won't be so nimble. You'll be left behind. So feel this, then tell me that Life is easy. Feel this, then tell me I should be pure. Feel this, then tell me not to feel crazy. Feel this, then you'll never be sure. I haven't written in awhile, and i haven't much to write about at the moment, so bare with me.. |
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
it's pretty good. i mean, no offense sara, but it's not your best. it's still pretty good though. it just didn't have the same effect as most of your other poems do. keep writing! bye! |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
None Taken. But I know what you mean. I have to watch what I'm writing now. Bsquirrel informed me that one of my poems was a little inappropriate. I'm being cautious, that's all. Thanks for being truthful, I'm just about to go read and reply your poem. Thanks again, Sara If we follow the invisible line of hatred, it will lead us straight to our hearts. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
you are a very talented poetess and yes let's not be too scary ok? this is very good BS. I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
if we must bear with this , then i think we'll be all right.  enjoyed this...and i know exactly how ya feel. say...have you seen Pump up the Volume with Christian Slater? it's right up your alley. it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
A big thanks to Brain sites and MidnightSon. What do you mean by scary!? Midnight ... are you new here? I looked in the dark poetry forum to locate some of you poetry and I came across none ... maybe I'll have to look harder, If you post though, tell me. I'm interested.  Thanks again! -Sara If we follow the invisible line of hatred, it will lead us straight to our hearts..... and pierce. |
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