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Follow The Leader
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Follow The Leader |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Follow the leader leap you frog! Where does your path take you? Blind sight! How many scenes can there be ‘round & ‘round the maypole? A single carry-on for me, thank you I choose to check nothing for it’s unnecessary Circumcise the excess! Clean out the closet of your life Leave behind past trinkets & stroll down the boulevard of dreams barefooted Take off the clothes and wallow in the sands of sanity on the beach of brilliance. A grand feeling this fine line Lasting through continual tides. |
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GoddessofHell Member
since 2002-07-09
Posts 76 |
Very nice....I enjoyed your poem very much. Heather |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I don't know how old you are (no matter) but getting "here" has taken me on quite a journey Kudos ~wranx I have great faith in Humanity...It's just most of the Humans, I'm not too keen on. E.F.Rose |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Some nice moments here Purity, nice moments...  K |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You tell em hun!!! Sing the song and I'll do some back up...I LOVE this!!!! take care you! ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
All I have to say is "Circumcise the excess" belongs on a t-shirt! She said burn ... together. |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
easy way to win the maypole game is to cut the ribbon, and stumble to the next game. this was cute. |
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leafseranade Member
since 2001-07-06
Posts 118Wisconsin, USA |
Yes! Noncomformity is the only way we'll survive. |
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