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Dark Poetry #3

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idrift2u
Member

since 2002-07-09

Posts 60
MD., USA

0 posted 2002-07-15 12:44 PM

Aba, Baba, Potato head, dark and gruesome,
Main Entry: 1cri·tique,
so luscious your skin and handsome,
Pronunciation: kr&-'tEk, kri-
I fry you, I wash and dry you,
Function: noun
I play hot potato with you,
Etymology: alteration of 2critic
But hot your not,
Date: 1702
just a game I pass the time with,
: an act of criticizing; especially : a critical
estimate or discussion
drift, I do to you,
Main Entry: 2critique
I see all your eyes,
Function: transitive verb
All you electrical possibilities,
Inflected Form(s): cri·tiqued; cri·tiqu·ing
I wanna skin ya, chop ya, and taste ya,
Date: 1751
put you in a bag,
: REVIEW, CRITICIZE
and sell ya
me go bed...

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-07-16 11:12 PM

You critique junkie! Get off my french fries! (what?)

Mike

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

2 posted 2002-07-17 11:27 PM

:confused: I liked it but it made me look down in my bag of chips to see if there was a little poet man in there at the bottom or somethin'. Great write!

~Jess

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