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Apocalyptic Fate |
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LADY_DEATH Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 105Fl |
Apocalyptic Fate Bloodshed, Bloodshed is what it will be Once your head belongs to me Temper, Temper temper of mine i punctured your eye sockets now you're blind the missing pieces of your brain caused by the metal blade All this torture But you're still alive i won't let you die And take the easy way out Experiencing the excitement of torturing those i hate Flashing vivid images Of their apocalyptic fate I'm getting bored time to end the game Into the incenerator i want to watch you burn! |
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Stinky Twinkie Member
since 2002-11-26
Posts 204Dinwiddie |
Awesome, this sounds like a death metal song...which is a good thing. Very good imagery thrown in there. -Stinky Twinkie- |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
A dark and frank poem on the part of the speaker. Somewhat remeniscent of Nazi actions during the holocaust. You have done a good job portraying evil as we have seen it in recent years. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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Long Island Slim New Member
since 2002-12-12
Posts 4 |
i particularly like the line.."temper temper, temper of mine.."..very musical. |
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