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Encarta Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 101My homeland is not of the world |
I rewrote it and it's better than it was before, but I don't think it sounds too good, what do you think? Alone Here comes death to rob his breath It's time to die And he knows why Alone he lays his head to rest Alone his dagger pierces his chest Piercing the hole where his heart should be Alone he lies in the new red sea Alone his soul leaves the body Alone it stands looking shoddy Alone it remains for all eternity Just as alone am I without thee "They do not love that do not show their love.”-Shakespeare [This message has been edited by Encarta (07-13-2002 05:29 PM).] |
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GoddessofHell Member
since 2002-07-09
Posts 76 |
Very nice...I enjoyed your poem very much. Heather |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
A nice, sad ache. She said burn ... together. |
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