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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-12-24 03:40 AM



Should I pull
the arrow now?
Should I just
release resist?
Yank the jagged stone
from me.
I desist.
I cease.

Or should I dig
even more deep
break the wood
of inner keep
and walk
forever with a limp?

Either way?

I'm still
a gimp...


© Copyright 2002 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-12-24 01:47 PM


LOL, you? a gimp?
Never. Never. Never.

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2002-12-27 07:26 AM


beating up on yourself again.......go kick someone elses ass instead, its more fun!!!!!!!!!!!!
LADY_DEATH
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3 posted 2002-12-27 04:02 PM


I thought that was absoluely hilarious.And very artistic.


Dark Angel
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4 posted 2002-12-27 04:10 PM


Yer Gorgeous!
serenity blaze
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5 posted 2002-12-27 09:55 PM


chuckle, and yanno? I was SO serious when I wrote this!!!!

thanks all, and inkedgoddess, should I call ya inky? somehow that doesn't suit ya tho...

hmmm...

and OH, Marie...my luscious Aussie, where ya been, (*pained eyes* please don't answer "outback")

Hugs to all, thanks for reading, and yep, go ahead, LAUGH, while serenity exits--LIMPING.


inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2002-12-27 10:08 PM


call me michele,
real name
i guess i had to expose it sometime

bsquirrel
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7 posted 2002-12-30 07:45 PM


Kudos to yr angst
and michele's reply.

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