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idrift2u
Member

since 2002-07-09

Posts 60
MD., USA

0 posted 2002-07-10 08:40 PM

To share this broken limp node
She climbs the road,
within the back lash side stone.

Whether or not this reminder works
The darkness and pitiful amber brush lurks.

Too long of time passing, glances
Spider webs broken, socks left behind a-soakin'.

To bear this weight of horror and tragedy
One comes along the road to drift into the frame
of mind,
of one,
no one,
to another hurts much farther
Stop the innocence, behold the day glow green.

To teach the passion of the unforgivable scraps
The storms cometh, gathering, scattering...

My daydream of hell worthy people, so stab worthy
Worthless climb of agony, talking to a mirror...

Could it be me?

idrift2u
Member

since 2002-07-09

Posts 60
MD., USA

1 posted 2002-07-10 08:45 PM

By the way, LMNOP is me...

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

2 posted 2002-07-10 09:43 PM

Very brooding... I like.

"Es ist Folter, aber ich bin fast dort." Robert Smith's Torture in Deutsch.

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

3 posted 2002-07-10 10:21 PM

Welcome, idrift2LMNOP

I liked this one ( I believe I have read it before)

Will you be sharing more of these with us?

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

idrift2u
Member

since 2002-07-09

Posts 60
MD., USA

4 posted 2002-07-10 11:11 PM

Trust me, you have not heard this one before....I'll explain later

Thanks, glad you did like it...

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

5 posted 2002-07-11 01:22 PM

Glad to stumble across this wonder!!!

ALready been here? and I was about to do the mushy welcome thing!!!

enjoyed this!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2002-07-13 07:16 PM

I figured as much when I saw Clouds posted under two different names. (that's been fixed, though)

Any poem with spiders in it is okay with me! Ask wranx!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

idrift2u
Member

since 2002-07-09

Posts 60
MD., USA

7 posted 2002-07-13 07:19 PM

Wow, thanks buddy

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