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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Gluttonous need- swallows thirst quench, in taint of challenge ~me~ wander lust- drags deep grip strides- through my soul stay? I (of course) sting the crossroad- jump the fence of indecision, and mingle with regret You tickled my strings but a life too late… Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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GoddessofHell Member
since 2002-07-09
Posts 76 |
I love this but I love all your poems...I wish I had written this. My favorite lines... I (of course) sting the crossroad- jump the fence of indecision, and mingle with regret You tickled my strings but a life too late… Enjoyed much! Heather |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
"You tickled my strings but a life too late…" Ive used up way too many words, to say just this. Damn you! (j/k) ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Devina... outstanding!! loved this! ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Heather-I am sooo glad you are here girlie!!! thank you sweets!!! wranx- now hun...no need to say j/k...I have a sense of humour that you would not BELIEVE!!! grin... ask anyone! hugs to you for that smile with my coffee this mornin! Tier- Thanks for that poetess...always much appreciated!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
*tickle tickle* She said burn ... together. |
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