Dark Poetry #3 |
If I ever |
bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
If I ever plead, chop me off at the knees so I cannot kneel and beg for you to stay with me. If I ever cry, put spiders in my eyes so their webs will kill my sight, to hold a drink of tears and light. If I ever pray, throw me to the day so I'm forced to see the crowds of questions there repaid, renowned. If I ever love, strike me from above. Lightning bolt away so with you I will join and stay. She said burn ... together. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Such achingly sweet words... nice one, Mikey... ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
"to hold a drink of tears and light"... "If ever I pray, throw me to the day"... Most perfect, bud. I loved this one. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, both. She said burn ... together. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Bittersweet, squirrel dude AND, still has that Arachnid thing goin' on. ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Well, I even have a spider pendant I always wear, so I can see how that might happen. Thanks, wranx. (hey, that rhymes!) She said burn ... together. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Now quit that this instant! Though I know you quit that moments after writing it. Go watch No Such Thing. Aside from the ending, it was soooo good, and it's cute enough to snap any bad mood. "Es ist Folter, aber ich bin fast dort." Robert Smith's Torture in Deutsch. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Huh? You're making me look for something? She said burn ... together. |
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