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TAKEN BY LOVE , Part 1
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TAKEN BY LOVE , Part 1 |
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Bee Junior Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 23Ireland |
TAKEN BY LOVE ,Part 1 (Dedicated to my withdrawn one) You took me By the heart Seductive smile Calling from a thousand years Gentle soulmate, beloved face Safe surfer on waves of desire Radiant heat of love Sheltered by Tuscany’s heaven Innocent Indian summer sun Glaring Fata Morgana of togetherness You took me By the hand Onto cliff’s top Earth embracing Passionate sea Gannets, master of arts Flying away with our sorrow So graceful in their optimism Soaring into sky-blue future Light winged with love’s abundance You took me Dancing for joy Cuban music’s trance Vienna night’s tumble Emeralds dissolving Fragrant sweat Love boat’s magic Laughter, ecstasy, sigh in Strong sure frame of emotions Waking up to warm rays of confidence You took me Under my skin Voluptuous Aegean Sea Smooth caressing pebbles Embracing, enfolding, entwining Softly sweeping seconds of Truth, love, lastingness Carried by goat bell’s music Amalgamated into unconditional oneness Relief in blameless, liberated fusion You took me Into our soul Precious past Destined future Mates so many times Transformation through telepathy One body-mind-spirit In time Trying to stop the karmic wheel From tearing your half away from mine .........continues Part 2 |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Yeah I know this feeling  DkW |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
Beautiful*S* I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
This is so lovely and descriptive! I love how you've woven the strands of nature and exotic locations into the mesh of your feelings. Very nicely done! Lary |
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Bee Junior Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 23Ireland |
Dkw, T-moon Thanks all for your comments. Laryalee, thanks for your kind remark.About nature: in fact I have added the location in two lines. It is a very special place in Ireland You took me By the hand Onto cliff's top Erin's earth embracing Passionate Irish Sea ... |
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